How to
Save the World
Part Nine
This is probably
the most delicate part of any game. Naturally, after you have designed enough
dungeons and levels for your game, you too will be looking for the perfect
grand finale. CAUTION! You cannot have a good grand finale if you don’t lead up
to it properly. It’s just impossible. And in order to make way for the perfect
ending now, you must discard some of the rules we set earlier.
For example,
where earlier it was a good idea to expand access to all lands of the created
world gradually, now you must reveal all possible paths, roads, and lands. You
must keep in mind that this time around, you are expanding for the last time.
Earlier it was
also a good idea to start subquests and miniquests. Now you must be ending
them. On the same lines, it may have been a good thing earlier in the game to
require movement from one place to the next on special missions (e.g. races
across the land to deliver something before it expires). Once the hero enters
the final land, in my case Spade Mountain, he must never be required to turn
back. As soon as Dominick enters the Mountain area, he will never have to go to
Club Town or anywhere else in order to win the game. He can turn back if he
wants to, or if he has an extracurricular activity he wants to do, but
technically, he can stay on the Mountain for the rest of the game.
A good way to
think of this concept is as if the final land is a perpendicular universe. In
this universe there are people who have major problems and don’t care much for
what is going on elsewhere in the world. The one difference is that this time
around the concerns of the people are actually your concerns, too. You are
about to face the final boss, the evil force you set out to vanquish long ago,
and nobody wants him vanquished more than the people of this final land, which
I will call “land X” unless I am referring to Spade Mountain specifically.
An alternative
used in many games is to have the residents of land X be loyal to the
evil overlord. This was most commonly found in the 2D games of Sega and SNES,
but you can still find it in some of the recent Final Fantasy games. In this
scenario, the hero must somehow make his way through the “fortress” and access
the inner walls of the castle. The hero is then making his way from the outside
to a point in the middle (“point of no return” concept). Some games go as far
as to make a maze out of the outer fortress part of the land and force the
gamer to find his way through.
I’ll go with the
first idea because it fits into my game so well. You’ll probably see why after
I explain the plot of the game further.
Now you leave
Club Town and go to the West Road past Obliteration field. Surprisingly enough,
the road forks in two directions. You cannot get through without using a
lightning bomb to clear away the rubble blocking the low road. And as to the
high road, you cannot get through the ominous gates without something to put in
the large keyhole in the middle. Well you can get to the low road anyway, and
once you do, you enter Spade Mountain Metropolis, a large town of burnt out
skyscrapers and burning ash heaps. It looks like this place has already seen
the worst of the action. Tour the city a little and you will find that some of the
citizens here survived the “incident,” although you don’t know exactly what
that is yet.
These people
have replaced their bombed-out buildings with temporary underground shelters
they are still in the process of digging. They are the Spades, and while they
look at you with some suspicion as an outsider, they are willing to be on good
terms with you. After all, you are wearing the clothing style of a true
Spadeland citizen, so you’re probably all right.
From these
people you learn that their current ruler, King Reginald, is a fraud and a
tyrant. He came into Spadeland with his army (made up mostly of lost souls he
has called from the past) and made quick the hostile takeover of the Mountain.
In his attack he captured and is holding hostage his own twin brother, Governor
Jerry Carmichael.
Governor
Carmichael rejected the family name apparently because it had a bad reputation
for tyrant kings up north. Hmm… pieces of the puzzle are coming together now.
On top of this is the fact that the governor recently escaped from his prison
and is now about to give a speech to the Spades at the Underground Festival
Hall.
You arrive at
the hall just as the speech is starting. Governor Carmichael does not look like
Dastard all that much, so he mustn’t be an identical twin. He is somewhat
short, brown-haired, and still has the broken remains of shackles hanging from
his wrist, and yet he is commanding in his speech.
Carmichael:
Friends! My brother will soon find out I have escaped, so I will speak quickly.
The entirety of our world is at war. King Aetre of Diamondland has stopped
Dastard for now, but we cannot be certain how the stalemate will end, or how
long it will last. The good King will try to attack soon, so we must be ready
to join him. People, this is no time for cowardice. This is no time for fear.
Though we face the souls of ages past we must fight, and we must fight now!
Man in Crowd:
But how can we win when we face the dead? Who can fight them? Certainly, we
stand no chance!
Carmichael: But
we must try. These underground shelters are no safety to us now. All one has to
do is cover all entryways and we are all buried alive.
Voice from the
Doorway: Or we could just come in and slaughter you while you’re trapped.
And with that,
five Lost Souls enter, armed with bow staffs like your own. You are the only
person in the festival hall with weaponry to face them, so face them you must.
When you win, the last enemy sets off a bomb device that causes the ceiling to
fall on the area.
Carmichael:
Quick! Everybody follow me!
The governor
leads you and the people through a series of tunnels that eventually helps you
escape. Make it outside and the governor will applaud your bravery and ask your
name. On hearing “Dominick,” the crowd stirs and the governor kneels.
Carmichael: Why,
only that name, by the legend, can lead the Spades to victory. I surely would
have fallen short of defeating my brother, but you… you faced five Lost Souls
and did not even flinch!
Lewis: What is
this? I only faced those things because they attacked me. Why are you kneeling
to me?
Carmichael:
Could it be that you don’t even know who you are? Lewis Dominick, you are the
rightful heir to the throne of Spadeland!
*Notice how this
comes as no shock to the gamer, but it’s huge news to Lewis. This effect is
intended because it in a way rewards the gamer for paying attention. Any time
the player correctly predicts what is going to happen, so long as it does not
happen too often, the gamer is rewarded with the confirmation of his / her suspicions.
Lewis: You mean
I’m supposed to be a king?
Carmichael: A
king? Lewis, this land, like my own Clubland, is tired of the oppression kings
have laid upon it. The people do not call for a new oppressor. They call upon
the Ace to defeat the tyrant King. Look around you.
Lewis looks
around as the people join the general in kneeling.
Carmichael: You
are young, Lewis Dominick, but you have proven your valor and saved the lives
of us all. We cannot ask you to do more than you have already done, but the least
I can do is offer you the Key to the City. If you accept our cry for help, the
key will come in useful.
Carmichael gives
you a huge key. Lewis takes a long look at it. Carmichael tells him that the
key can be shrunk to fit in a pocket by pressing the red button on the side. Do
this and you will have a giant key with you for the rest of your adventure.
Gee, what a help. Of course, if you remember earlier, there’s a good place
where a giant key could probably be handy by the upper path of the West Road.
Before you go there, explore Spade Mountain Metropolis and see if you can get
some more extracurricular help. You’ll meet some intriguing faces in this town,
like Giovanni, the long-lost mob boss Alfredo is waiting for in the Heartbreak
Hotel, among others.
At long length
you take the high road and find yourself climbing Spade Mountain. You must
defeat several Lost Souls along the way, some of whom seem to come out of
nowhere, so remain on your guard. At the top is a gate that leads into the top
of the mountain. Before you can enter, though, four somewhat large guards
ambush you. Defeat them and you will hear a more-than-a-little-intimidating
voice speak to you. You look up at hearing it to see none other than King
Reginald Dastard standing atop the mountain looking down on you.
Dastard: Ah, and
who is this? And why are you so hasty to kill my fine guards?
Lewis: I am
Lewis Dominick, and I am sent by King Aetre to demand your surrender.
Dastard:
Surrender? Ha! I have the king cornered in his wrecked Castle. And I doubt
Aetre sent you in the first place. Even the dim-witted Diamond King could not
be so stupid as to send a young boy to my mountain alone.
*A good rule of
thumb is that whenever a character insults the author of this story, he’s gonna
die before the whole thing is over. Count on it.
Dastard: No… I
believe my brother sent you. Carmichael, you fool! And to deliver the Dominick
into my hands so nicely! (Cruel laugh) And, Mr. Dominick, I have also met your
little girlfriend, the one you call “Alexandra.” Don’t worry, she’s fine. You
won’t find her here, either. You could say I made sure of it she went to a
better place. (Chuckle)
Lewis stares
in amazement as Dastard drops a badly bent ninja sword in front of you.
Dastard: But a
child like yourself is not even worthy of facing an opponent such as I. Then
again, you fought well against my guards. I will therefore offer you the chance
to come through my castle and prove yourself. < The gate opens. > I will
be waiting for you, Lewis.
Dastard opens a
hole in the top of the mountain and drops through it, once again laughing in
that sinister way he is known for. Here’s where I have set a little trap for
the gamer. If he goes through the gate, conveniently unlocked for him, he heads
to certain death in the Mountain Chamber. If he is smart, though, he will
examine the sword laid before him. Hidden under the grip padding of the handle
is a message, Ky’s last note to Lewis.
*Remember:
earlier I pointed out what a flaw it is for the same person to be captured by
the enemy twice. Believe me, that is exactly what I am avoiding here by Ky’s
letter. You see, something has happened to Ky. Either she is dead (but we all
know that’s impossible, don’t we?) or she’s captured (but that’s impossible
too, right?) or maybe… she’s got a plan and the whole death thing is a hoax
(yes, that must be it). But I am too far into my game to start any new
paradoxes or complicate the plot too much further, so if I’m gonna use this
technique, I had better back it up with an explanation now. And I’ll
have to explain everything. This is the time for secrets to be revealed,
not presented, to the gamer.
As the letter is
read, the screen changes to cinema setup. Roll the movie!
Lewis,
The day I pulled
the switch I was trapped in the ruins of the ancient castle in Club Town, under
the Library. I was left there to die by a certain roaming jester with the key
to the entryway. Fortunately for me, your town just got obliterated, and the
library is crushed. To make a long story short, the entire castle held its
place except the doorway, so I escaped in the morning. Then I saw all of
Dastard’s troops outside. I managed to stay unnoticed because their attention
was on Dastard, who was talking to a young boy in the Northern Leaf of the
township. Lewis, I must say, it took a lot of courage to sit there and listen
to such an intimidating man while completely helpless as you were. I tried to
evacuate all the citizens of the town (maybe your aunt did not tell you about
the evacuation), and by now you’ve probably seen the survivors at my hometown,
Safe Haven Village. Not everybody made it there, but I did the best I could.
Anyway, when King Aetre’s army arrived and you fled to the Woodlands, I was
forced to flee by the North Road. I soon saw there was no escape, as Dastard’s
troops retook the entrance to the town, and I was trapped inside. I am
currently writing this letter from the last tall tree standing in the town; the
evil soldiers may know battle strategy, but in their armor, they still can’t
climb trees! I am using the sheets of paper Aetre gave me to post warnings
about the bombing. I guess I can’t use the papers for that now, so I am instead
writing a series of notes I think will help you on your journey. If I am
successful, then you have already seen all of them except this one. By the time
I started writing this note, the good army had already pushed Dastard’s troops
away, so I guess it would be safe to come down from my perch now. But before I
do, I must warn you of something: when you get to the top of Spade Mountain,
don’t go through the gate you see in front of you! It’s a trap, Lewis!
According to the books in the library, there should be a secret entrance to the
mountain lair in the ground below you. Clear the dirt, Lewis, and find the trap
door in front of the gate. It’s the only way you’ll ever reach Dastard alive!
Now that I’ve written this letter, I will try to get it to Spade Mountain
somehow. Don’t worry about me, Lewis. I have a feeling we’ll meet up again
soon. Just keep your courage up, Lewis! Never lose the faith!
Ky
(still in
cinema) Ky puts her letter under the grip of the sword and climbs down the
tree. As she is walking, two men from behind attack her. They are both
recognizable as two of the guards Lewis has just defeated. Ky fights, but her
sword is knocked from her hands. She runs for safety into the Northern
Woodland, the rest of her letters currently in her pocket. The guards cannot
keep up with her while they have armor on, so they give up the chase.
Guard 1: (pant,
pant) It’s no use. We’ll never catch her. King Reginald will be very
disappointed.
Guard 2: (pant,
wheeze) Don’t worry, Bruno. I got the girl’s sword. We can just tell his
majesty we killed the girl and left her with the other bodies in Club Town.
Surely the sword is proof enough we killed her, right?
Guard 1: What?
How’s a sword gonna prove anything? And how’s the king gonna know that’s her
sword anyway? Any ninja from our side would use such a sword.
Guard 2: I
dunno. Just put some blood on it from one of those corpses over there. Then
we’ll just say we couldn’t bring the body back because it was too mutilated.
Yeah, that’s it. Go get some blood on the sword, Bruno.
Guard 1: Yes,
Ben.
Bruno
runs off. End cinema. Coming up, Part 10: Heat.